Targeted training for this skill. Preview freely, then level up through spot, fix, and create.
Instead of simply stating facts or feelings, use vivid details, actions, and dialogue to let readers experience what's happening. This means painting a picture with words rather than just announcing information.
Showing makes your writing come alive and helps readers feel like they're right there with your characters. It creates a movie in the reader's mind instead of just giving them a boring list of facts.
ā Sarah was really angry at her brother. ā Sarah's face turned red as she clenched her fists. 'That's MY chocolate!' she shouted, stomping her foot so hard the floorboards creaked.
As I crossed the finish line, I realized that winning the race wasn't just about being fast - it was about never giving up, even when things got tough.
Learn to recognize the issue in examples
Practice rewriting to correct the issue
Write original content demonstrating mastery